Talk:The Workshop/@comment-4997101-20120510134122/@comment-4076672-20120510142911

It's not bad... though there's a bit of over-editing. And we must be very careful with editing such info 'cos this is a "source page" and will be used as reference, when editing other pages on the Wiki.

"Great Father" likely has a meaning within the political or propaganda system within the Zahard Empire so it shouldn't be removed. People view Zahard and possibly the 10 family heads like a God and 10 great warriors(like gods). Zahard's daughters = ultimate species and everything...

"Ultimate ambition" doesn't neccesarily mean the organization was founded for that purpose... it could've started off as something different. So i put it back. ^^;;

And that it's located outside the Tower shouldn't be removed too 'cos TOG is connected to the rest of the universe(forgot the name).

Also, relationship doesn't mean affiliation which I recall, under American meaning, means to be closely involved. They could be co-operating loosely and so on. It's too early to determine how they're connected and if it's on good or bad terms as it seems regulars are expelled and rankers are accepted.

Also, they don't threaten the Empire but they might be considered a threat by some, you see. There is zero indication a politically neutral organization or group won't start to pick sides someday for whatever reasons. And as scientists and technologists, if they feel their research is being threatened... well... who knows what might happen? Then again, they could stay politically neutral forever.

Btw. Masceth did help or basically, choose Zahard and 10 Families to be worthy of receiving Gong Bang's items, after all. However, he himself is deified within the current propaganda system which might... bring some additional favours and whatever, within the current Empire. I dunno if he's willing to forsake being worshipped by much of the Tower's inhabitants or not, if the Empire crumbles. =P

Sorry... i'm tired and rambling. And uhm, just explaining why I undid some of your edits. ^^